Hello Joseph, I really like this blog post and let me tell you why. I really like how you added photos it makes me able to connect to what you did so that's really cool. I also like how you said you added what you did like rock climbing and hiking. Maybe next time you could check grammar and sentences but other wise it's really good.
Bonjour Joseph My name is Olivia from Belfast School, I really like the way you put lots of photos in. This reminded me of when I went on my camp in term 1 it was so fun, if you want to see more about it check out my blog. Maybe next time you could describe it better so we can understand it better.
Bonjour Joseph, The camp you went on looks really cool. This reminded me of when I went on a school camp. Maybe next time you could do a bit more of a description on what you did. Kind Regards Caitlin
kia ora I am Joshua from Belfast school it looks like you had a lot of fun doing that. it made me think of the time that I went on camp with the school. maybe next time you could say what some of your favorite things were
Hello Joseph,
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post and let me tell you why. I really like how you added photos it makes me able to connect to what you did so that's really cool. I also like how you said you added what you did like rock climbing and hiking. Maybe next time you could check grammar and sentences but other wise it's really good.
Bonjour Joseph My name is Olivia from Belfast School,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you put lots of photos in.
This reminded me of when I went on my camp in term 1 it was so fun, if you want to see more about it check out my blog.
Maybe next time you could describe it better so we can understand it better.
-Kind regards
Olivia
Bonjour Joseph,
ReplyDeleteThe camp you went on looks really cool.
This reminded me of when I went on a school camp.
Maybe next time you could do a bit more of a description on what you did.
Kind Regards
Caitlin
kia ora I am Joshua from Belfast school it looks like you had a lot of fun doing that. it made me think of the time that I went on camp with the school. maybe next time you could say what some of your favorite things were
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